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Critique, Please.

PODDproPODDpro subscriber Posts: 1
edited March 2009 in Website Critique
Hi,
This is a junk collecting business that I came up with.
Please let me know what you think. 

www.Junkpodd.com
 

I did design everything on the site myself and I need help on just about everything.
My goal is to convey an easy way to contact me for my service as well as a platform for
marketing to possible affiliate companies/people 
 
Any criticism is what I am looking for to improve the site...
Thanks.


PODDpro3/2/2009 4:23 AM
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    banzaibertbanzaibert subscriber Posts: 0
    What you are selling is very clear. You just need more info about your company, Put a little bit of nice graphics on your site so it`ll be attractive.
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    stevewyrostekstevewyrostek subscriber Posts: 0


    Hi-




     


    You may want to consider the following:




     


    - The title on the right side of the pages may be redundant.

     



    - The fact that they`re on the right side of the page might be disconcerting to some, since we read left to right

     



    - Maintaining the same font all the way through- either Arial or Verdana works best for computer screens

     



    - The green, orange and black bolded and large and small font might appear amateurish. You may want to consider toning it down

     



    - Print readers read and web readers scan so sentences and paragraphs work best when they`re short. 3 to 5 sentences per paragraph, 5 to 15 words per sentence.

     



    - Have a call to action on each page

     



    - You may want to consider moving the pricing guide up and have short bursts of text to the left of it

     



    - There may be too much white space on the pricing page




     


    Anyway- those are some of my thoughts- I hope you find them helpful.

     


    Steve Wyrostek




    No Cliche Copy




    Internet Writing for Business People by Business People



    <a rel="nofollow" href="mailto:steve@noclichecopy.com">





     

     
     

     

     
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