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Seeking an Angel Investor

mrcompletemrcomplete subscriber Posts: 1
edited July 2006 in Elevator Pitches


  • robertjrobertj subscriber Posts: 0 Member
    Dear mrcomplete:
    A couple of comments:
    1. Your projected revenue will not service a $5 million loan.
    2. One key to success in high growth companies (especially startups) is focus. Generally, combining 2 seemingly separate businesses (painting and buildings) into one entity will diffuse focus. If there is synergy or other compelling reason to merge these 2 businesses - you should describe the benefits.
    3. Just curious, what software was used to create the executive summary?
    4. Did you use it to create the complete plan?
    All the best,
    Robert Johnson
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