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Copywork help needed for eBay auction

HondoTechHondoTech subscriber Posts: 3
edited August 2006 in Thought Leadership
I am creating an eBay auction for some personalized wooden Angel christmas ornaments that will run through the end of the year.  Writing good copy is not a strongpoint of mine.  Here is what I have come up with so far, please feel free to comment and suggest any changes as you see fit. I do not know if the formatting/color is going to display well here:
Angel Ornaments
by
Ultimate Awards & Engraving
Looking for a unique personalized gift that is as special as the person that is going to receive it?
Our Angel ornaments can each be personalized with your message.
Each ornament measures approximately 3 3/4" high by approximately 2 1/2" wide, depending on the specific design you choose.  Your ornament will arrive in a red velvet gift bag.  Each ornament is adorned with a ribbon so that it is ready to hang on a christmas tree!
Here is a link to a page with some photos of the actual product
http://www.ultimateawards.net/angel/angel.html</A>
 
I am looking at a Buy It Now price of $7.00-$9.00.  Some input here as well would be most appreciated.

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