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Copywork help needed for eBay auction
HondoTech
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I am creating an eBay auction for some personalized wooden Angel christmas ornaments that will run through the end of the year. Writing good copy is not a strongpoint of mine. Here is what I have come up with so far, please feel free to comment and suggest any changes as you see fit. I do not know if the formatting/color is going to display well here:
Angel Ornaments
by
Ultimate Awards & Engraving
Looking for a unique personalized gift that is as special as the person that is going to receive it?
Our Angel ornaments can each be personalized with your message.
Each ornament measures approximately 3 3/4" high by approximately 2 1/2" wide, depending on the specific design you choose. Your ornament will arrive in a red velvet gift bag. Each ornament is adorned with a ribbon so that it is ready to hang on a christmas tree!
Here is a link to a page with some photos of the actual product
http://www.ultimateawards.net/angel/angel.html</A>
I am looking at a Buy It Now price of $7.00-$9.00. Some input here as well would be most appreciated.
Angel Ornaments
by
Ultimate Awards & Engraving
Looking for a unique personalized gift that is as special as the person that is going to receive it?
Our Angel ornaments can each be personalized with your message.
Each ornament measures approximately 3 3/4" high by approximately 2 1/2" wide, depending on the specific design you choose. Your ornament will arrive in a red velvet gift bag. Each ornament is adorned with a ribbon so that it is ready to hang on a christmas tree!
Here is a link to a page with some photos of the actual product
http://www.ultimateawards.net/angel/angel.html</A>
I am looking at a Buy It Now price of $7.00-$9.00. Some input here as well would be most appreciated.
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Comments
The Swaynester
Do you feel that the personalized ornament is worth the price?
The link to the photos was for the forum`s benefit. the photos will be displayed inside the auction itself.
Since you agree the price is a great bargain how many should I put ya down for to order?
I do want to run a 2nd auction with the different designs in it... I just havent figured out how to show EVERYTHING that we can do with them.
Truth be told... we can take any vector image and turn it into an "ornament". Logos, sports, etc.
can help (help isn`t always free from them though) as I`m a Powerseller on
eBay. but it looks good and I think your product will do well!
If thats the whole description , thenn sorry to say but it sucks , sorry buddy , but u asked for advice and thats my true advice , though i am also learning this thing , you can check out mine at www.writers.homestead.com/proposal.html</A> and please rate mine also.
Angel Ornaments by Ultimate Awards & Engraving
This year give that special someone in your life a gift that`s as unique as they are.
Our wooden Angel ornaments, which you can personalize with your own message, are approximately 3 3/4" high and 2 1/2" wide (depending on the specific design you choose).Your ornament is adorned with a ribbon and ready to be hung on your Christmas tree!
Kudos to theswaynester for the re-write of the ad.
jcoffman, do you think the price at $8.00 is reasonable?
knockknockhlo... You may want to run a spellcheck your link coz "coz:" aint a real word. I imagine it will be real hard tying to sell someone your ability to write a competent sales letter when your own page is full of typos and gramatical errors.
Anyway ,you just asked for comment
;item=190031152975&rd=1&sspagename=STRK%3AMESE%3AIT& amp;rd=1
Thank you to everyone that helped with the copywork.
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I need to figure out a way to create a table with the photos in it so the auction page isnt so looong.