sales page critique, first time ver

abellojuan

Hi!

I just did my first sales page ever and I would like to receive some feedback to know what can be improved:
http://www.timehabits.co/worksmarternotharder.html
After it is done I will put some ads on google and see if there is any interest in what I am offering. If it works I will go on on creating the course. If it does not I would try a different type of marketing strategy.


ps. I am not a native English speaker. There might be some grammatical or ortographical errors but I will get the sales page professionally proofread

Adam Jones

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