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Timothy · February 2008

Hello, I just put up the index page of my website. Would people please view it and let me know what they think of the design. It is only the main page, so none of the link will work.I want to know what everyone thinks of the design before spending a lot of time to complete the site. Let me know what you think of: the colors, the fonts, the graphics, the load time, my logo, everything. One part of the page that is not up, but will be, is contact information on the left side of the page. I want people to know right off that they can trust us. I also gave a short description at the top of the page so that visitors will know what the business is. Thanks for looking.
Timothy

Timothy · February 2008

Sorry, I forgot the URL.
www.safetradz.com
Timothy

buggrep · February 2008

Timothy the site looks goos but i would think about covering more space with the site layout. Also, if possible try to use some more attractive colors. These colors are a lil faded. Try to find some web2.0 colors to make the site more appealing.

Timothy · February 2008

Thanks for the thoughts. I do plan to add more content to the page, so there will be less open space. I just added another color to the page, which I had thought of doing it before, but was not quite sure if it would work. I just used the green to highlight some of the page. Let me know what you think.
Timothy

bizenez · February 2008

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Timothy · February 2008

I am in the process of changing the appearance of the site so that it fills more of the screen. About the color, I am going to add alittle more color to it, but I will also be adding card images to the site to brighten it up. The header (at some point) will be an image with card in the background, so that will change the fading look. Thanks for the thoughts everyone. Once I have added more to the site I will repost. But if any one else has more thoughts I would love to hear them.

Timothy

bizenez · February 2008

Timothy
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Webline · February 2008

Very narrow and cramped; you will either end up limiting the content you can add to a page, or end up messing up your layout with too much content.The gradient images in the middle don`t blend well; being images, the text on them aren`t effective for SEO, nor will links on them work.I would rather see some of your services on the front page, not just generalizations that don`t really say anything. You want "future business", but what exactly is your business?The page looks unbalanced with different sized columns.

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