My first YouTube video for my new website

textmarketingexpert

My first YouTube video for my new websitehttp://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9Yn5yL3zpIw


I`m a novice but gave it a shot. Let me know what you think.
textmarketingexpert2/22/2009 8:36 PM

textmarketingexpert

do you have any video making resource links?
Thanks for the feed back!!!

iBoomer

You need to polish the video. Your entrance is poor and delivery bland. Clearly define your mission. Your site looks better then your video would suggest.

Videography

It`s not bad for a first shot.  There`s too much dead time at the start and end - get someone else to press the buttons.  Tighten up the script to make your relevant points more quickly. 

textmarketingexpert

Here`s my second try.http://www.youtube.com/homebasedbizsu..
What do yo think about the subtance of the message?
 
 
textmarketingexpert3/2/2009 11:23 AM

textmarketingexpert

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dDLuItsul4Q

 
 
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textmarketingexpert3/1/2009 3:11 PM