Critique of my opt-in box

Hi
I have made an opt-in box to promote a free eBook which describes how to build a successful Long-Term Membership Site.
I would like to get some constructive advice on the headline, the design and on the offer itself. Is there anything I could do to improve the offer? Is the offer easy to understand? Does the eBook download easily?
Thanks
RoarJ
http://www.memberteam.comRoarJ7/29/2008 4:04 PM
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