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orbitbusinessorbitbusiness subscriber Posts: 2
edited January 2009 in Website Critique
Please review my following website .Any comment and suggestion would be appriciated.
Thanks
Orbitbusinessloans
http://www.orbitbusinessloans.com
 

Comments

  • JmesJmes subscriber Posts: 4
    Hi there, and welcome to the community
    After reviewing your website I have a few suggestions:
    A - In the front page, your background color and the text background color don`t match, it makes the site appear less professional
    B - You should user better headings in your pages
    C - Your purchase link (Get Started Now) is quite long, why do you need it so big?
    D - You should add an About Us and Contact Us page - people like to see who they`re dealing with, and would like different options of contacting you prior to purchase
    E - The front page is quite long, in fact most of your pages are... try summarizing your info.
    Wish you luck
    Jmes 
  • patentandtrademarkpatentandtrademark subscriber Posts: 103
    consider registration of trademark with uspto
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