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Rate My 30-sec Script

JasonGJasonG subscriber Posts: 8
edited July 2010 in Sales
Hello all,
I'm not sure if this is the right place to post this, but
here goes...We are creating a commercial to be aired on local TV - 30 seconds.
We would like you all to rate our script and give us any advice you might have.
Here it is:
Sometimes even the best equipment can breakdown, get
attacked by virus', or malfunction when you least expect it.
When you sign up with My Tech Team, you get support and
protection around the clock. Whether you have a software issue, or need help
installing a new device, you can get help right away.
MyTechTeam technicians are highly trained, and locally
based, ready to help you with all your computer needs. Getting the support and
protection you need has never been easier or more affordable.
Get help right now at www dot my tech team dot net!
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