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SIP Marketing

sipmarketingsipmarketing subscriber Posts: 3
edited June 2009 in Website Critique
Hey Guys! We`ve used this forum before to get tips on how to improve out website!
We just built a new website! Any feedback would be greatly appreciated!SIP Marketing Group Website
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  • nevadasculnevadascul subscriber Posts: 3 Member

    Just my thoughts  on your site.  Your opening paragraph was a little week.  Maybe you could rework that paragraph?  Here is a suggestion.
    Make you online marketing dollars pay off with SIP Marketing Group.  We can increase your online presence and sales by:



     




            Working with you to develop an thorough understanding of your business  



        
       and your vision of its future.



     



    .      Turning that vision into sales through tried and tested Internet Marketing



         
     Techniques.



     




            Achieving these goals at a price you can afford.



     




    SIP Marketing Group
    is built upon a foundation of 25 years SMB sales/marketing experience. We have used our experience to benefit clients in virtually all industries.  We have raised their bottom line.  Let us help you achieve this same success.
    nevadascul6/21/2009 4:43 PM
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  • sipmarketingsipmarketing subscriber Posts: 3
    Thanks for the feedback Craig and Nevada. I appreciate it a lot.
    We`ll be working on some of the bugs and definitely the copy writing suggestions.
    Lee
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