Critique My Design Services Pitch

JCF2QJCF2Q Posts: 3subscriber
edited July 2009 in Elevator Pitches
Hello,
Need your help pitching my web 2.0 services..
 
"If your business or company is using Twitter for promotion and marketing, we could be of great assistance to you. My company, TwitterBackground.com, provides custom made backgrounds from our graphic artists for $95. Currently a $75 special running right now. Appearance and the ability to put more info and contact information in your Twitter background is very important!"
 
 
I know it`s alittle long, any suggestions?
 
Thanks,
James F.
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