Please Critique My Site!

MovingUp

 
                                  http://helpwithyouressay.com/
The site is still under construction, however we to launch within a few days.
What needs to be changed? What should we add? What advertisements should we use?
Looking forward for your comments!

cmysuccess

I launched my site a few months ago www.carehealthrx.com. Any suggestions on what needs to be changed?  or what should we add?
 
Thanks for your input