please give critique to my websites

pulsa

hello.
i have 2 websites.. http://daftarpulsa.com and http://pulsaelektrik.co.id , please give advice or critique how to improve both websites..
thanks you very much.

bharat.nimblechapps

Checkout your website in gtmetrix.com

Randi Miller

http://daftarpulsa.com

- The hero image at the top is very pixelated.
- Mobile menu is in an awkward position that you almost can't see it.

http://pulsaelektrik.co.id

- Hero image is squished
- Same responsive issues
- Way too many icons. I can't read the words but it feels like you are selling icons.

Sorry, don't understand the language to give thoughts on the verbiage.

I would highly suggest cutting down the content and remove all the bold flashy things. When everything looks important and urgent then nothing is important or urgent.

ankit007

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