Some feedback needed for an un-creative person!

jdlees

Hi Guys and Girls,

I'm quite an un-creative person. However, I designed a website for my latest business venture using Wix.

Compared to some of my competitors my website is quite plain. I am wanting to keep it professional since professionals are my target market. However, I was hoping you might be able to give me some first impression critiques of what you think of the design?

I'm looking for things such as:

- Does it encourage you to keep looking?
- Is the content clear?
- Is there too much content?
- Do I need to make it more colourful and use more pictures?

The website is http://www.eagleeyeproofreading.com.au

Thanks in advance!

Jordan

WebMedic

Hi,

First impression is good, it's clear what you offer and to whom.

This makes it look a bit unprofessional/cheap: https://i.imgur.com/umNApO3.png

I don't think you need more graphics and the content length is good.

All the best!

Darissa

And I liked

pedrolitoencuir

I was expected worse when I saw you built it on Wix.

It's pretty neat. Calls to action are there. I would trust the company if I were needing proofreading services.

One thing maybe: you should increase padding (space around elements) on menu items.

http://i.imgur.com/ZIfA6i6.png

See how "What is proofreading?" has no space to breathe left and right ?

HomerBluth

Looks great, cobber! Very responsive on both desktop and mobile.