WE'VE MOVED!
We are proud to announce our NEW community destination. Engage with resident experts and fellow entrepreneurs, and learn everything you need to start your business. Check out the new home of StartupNation Community at startupnation.mn.co
We are proud to announce our NEW community destination. Engage with resident experts and fellow entrepreneurs, and learn everything you need to start your business. Check out the new home of StartupNation Community at startupnation.mn.co
ANOTHER NEW WEBSITE

Hello everyone, I took a little advice from each of you and made a new website, I think it turned out well, what do you think?
www.nancysvacationsite.com
www.nancysvacationsite.com
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Derrick
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I like the color scheme and the pictures. I agree with the others that it`s too wide. I see you used a Microsoft theme. Do you know how to edit the HTML code by hand? If so, go to the first table tag where it says width="1112" and change it to something smaller. The whole home page looks too stretched out to me, anyway. Notably, a couple of the pictures look like they`re being forced to be wider than they really are.
I think you could also make the text under the pictures not be double-spaced, and that would help.
Another suggetion: your subheadline "I specialize in package deals" was disappointing to me. I only saw the "I specialize in" part at first (I had to scroll right to read it all), and after seeing the dolphin/moon picture, I was expecting it to say something more exotic. "Package deals" just sounds so prosaic. Maybe something like "Your dream vacation on a silver platter." That suggests that it`s the whole package, but it sounds much cooler.